hmm its hard to tell,.. i mean it got great potential, quality is pretty much full HQ,
and its hearable you do D&B and stuff like that.
perhaps a more dance-trance kinda song. but heck dont believe everything they tell you,
including me.
its also pretty hard to give advice to improve this piece..
it does not get boring, quality is far from perfect (like i said earlier)
altho.. the melody can use a bit more 'trance'
sorry to give such a bad review here...