right off the bet, i like the entire composition.
what i for some reason don't like is the eq color. (i know sounds weird let me explain)
feels like you've taken too much out from the mid section to make the song sound this way.
its better you take out this region of frequencies per sound so you have absolute total control.
other than that, keep improving and ill be on the lookout for more!
EDIT: bumped the score by half a star because you made this with a completely different DAW then you are used to.
i can understand the difficulty fixing this track, no worries.