the beginning kinda.. 'pushed' as in disturbing, my attention away.
but as soon as the 4/4 kicks came it kinda grabbed my attention again.
tho the kick doesnt need a boost like Pulsar said, but i agree with its other statements.
2.28 -> onward doesnt fit imo. it suddenly changes, too fast.
i also kinda miss a trancy bassline, and ofcourse some wonderfull pluck melodies, im sure there are plenty of inspirational sources around the net/radiostations (real artists) that might inspire you in doing the plucks or other things.
or maybe not.. lol.
anyhow this was my review,
the end lol