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[[Lx] In the Stars]

Starting, and then...

then what ?
The start was great gooz xD
I felt that trancy feeling in me, makes you wanna move
I suggest to download any ''Trance sample kicks''
Also wanna look for other samples like hi hat's, ride's, tom's.. whatever you want?

Lanix responds:

Yeah, I'll look into it. I don't really have many extras when it comes to FL studios. I'm just runnin' off the basic stuff at the moment. I've been messing with kicks and stuff to mix things up. it's all in time and practice

[[Lx] The Dreamer]

''PPK''

Search it up on youtube ;) ''PPK''
Nice synth, standard kickdrum - hihat's

Lanix responds:

Hm.. I'll check it out sometime.
Yeah, they get the job done and I'm not really lookin' at things like that. I mostly focused on gettin effects and the "main automotion" as FL studios likes to call it, to work for me.
Thanks for the comment :P

[Discovered (Hi-Tech Edit)]

ANd again! ,,

AW SOME NESS!
this is like WOA to my ears xD
The beat is powerfull, i recognize Tiesto - Lethal Industry(Beat) a bit in it :P
and 8 bit or square ? cant hear tho :P
Great stuff ^^

5.5 - 10.10

Airprogressive responds:

this track is a mixture between different styles, or at least is suppossed to be that xD

thanks again 4 your review & great ratings!

[The Bongo Wars (Europe)]

aaawwwww

just awsomeness! blabla im not good in my english xD
Anyways,

This traxx sure shows fire!
Very nice progression :O fast at some points but i see it doesnt matter since this one blast speakers :P
All the sounds balance evenly very nice,
Tho i got a feeling ive heard this synth(notes) somewhere?
I just dont know when and where ¬¬

Keep it goin like this!
5.5 - 10.10

Airprogressive responds:

Thank you D-Chain!
I'm glad you like it

:)

[-={DJ-PHX}=- Fiery Apocalypse]

Jow ^^

well id like to share some thougth's and critic with your new track :)

First of all; what i recognize is the fast catchy bpm.
It lets me feel this track is HH(Happy Hardcore?)

second;
the thingy what i miss in this is a realy strong and catchy but still soft bass you know.. one that realy fits in HH
The kick is in 1 word WOW ^^
The piano is also very very nice!
Just as the synth your using.

Well.. the overal isnt pretty bad tho..
it just needs a little tweaking here and there maybe a better mastering
and another bass(sound)
but unlike the down rating of my critic it still is a very nice start to workout better :)
Well i suggest to keep it a little easy on indeed b'coz your tired :P
Anyways if you still have some reserve left, could you also check out my new track ?^^
its called 'Open Your Heart(Original Mix)'

Keep it up ;)
(7/10 - 4/5)

-Tim

unrealdark responds:

Yeah it has a Bpm of 170, I wanted to make somehing fast paced.
I think I'll insert another bass, at first I wanted to make a really fat bass but I see a softer one would fit in much nicer. And LOL! yeah I gotta master it I forgot rofl..
I'll chase this down tomorrow, and yeah I still got some energy left for a review. ;)

[Light as a feather...]

well,

its your first try on trance..
so i wont be too hard this time.

The start is very nice and progresses a little as progressive ;)
I do hear you have some experience tho,
BUT, its indeed not trance as you said in the PM :P
I hear also DNB ;) thats nice man :)
Its also a bit techno'isch..

What i hate about this track it is the weird sound, i dunno what vsts you used, but try to make it more trancy ;)
Well just as i told, the DNB is awsomeness ;)
The progression is also nice.
this track could be made bigger,
With a little tweakin and peakin here and there, and maybe some high notes added at some points :P

PS; dont use TOO much samples, it makes your track worthless/awfull man ;)
if you DO wanna use samples, make you own ;)

8/10 - 4/5 ;)
(Woops, sorry for lowering the rating of the track with 0.04 points, My bad xD)

-Tim

deadmetal420 responds:

rofl. .04 isnt a big deal bra. lol.

[hum hum hum]

Yow man!

you improved allot since the last one :)
but.. i dunno under what genre i could put this just to mention, i hear allot sounds, like 8-bit or so,
i can REALY here trance, so i wonder if you also could make trance youknow :P
its easier then HS
anyways back to the song :P

Im sorry to tell you this now; but i hate the kick, its like a jumpstyle kick and doesnt fit in hardstyle ;)
what i DO like, is the melo your doing there! Oh man, i do SO love it :D
and feels so damn great listening to it! :D
(Thats why i wonder if you could make trance like a pro you know)

The 8-bit or something could be replaced by another sound, i dont know what kind of vst's you used in this one, id like to know if i may ;)

well i told you the real BIG pointers and those are only;
the kick
8-bit

ill give you a 10/10, just bcoz of the melo :D
i just cant tell you how much i love it :D
and a 3,5/5 (4/5)
I hope you can do something with the critic ;)

PS: could you also check my newest track; Sky Dreamer ;)
Thnx ^^

-Tim

deadmetal420 responds:

yea the kick was bothering me too. but i couldnt put my finger on it. but because you called it jumpstyle, its probably the bass. it sticks out too much im assuming. anyway, yea dude. ill deffinately check out your new track! :D

[-={DJ-PHX}=- Progressive {WIP}]

Well,

To start with, Its VERY calming :)
as a second, its not typical progtrance, or as you call it progressive trance :P
this is more chill-out trance.
its not typical my style of trance :P
but still gonna give you a 10/10 - 4,5/5
(4,5 is imposible, so ill just give a 4/5) bcoz of the great work you prove with this :)
theres not much to critic on this :P
just finnish it soon! :)

PS; Check out our new song(its a collab)

Cheers!

unrealdark responds:

Yeah it's indeed calming, I did my best to create some 'progressive' atmosphere.
But it was also my first try so probably not the best lol. Thanks for reviewing, I'll check your collab right away. ;)

[-={DJ-PHX}=- Flutlicht Icarus]

Creative =)

Well, actually i cant speak with 'alot' of words now :P
coz im at school.. if the teacher see's what im doing im busted.
But, its Creative, u use very nice effect's, the only thing that bothers me is the sound of the synth in the middle part, but it does fit in the song(dont see this as critism) its just my taste of how a trance song could be :P
Unlike that, the vocal fit's nicely too :)
its almost pro man =)
I wonder if you could also make some 'harder' trance, or a variation between trance & progressive ^^
Coz you do have a good feeling for ritme,
Btw, from 1:10/1:11 i hear rly dark but nice synth comming.
so, my second wonder is if you could make hardtrance too :P

Anyways, im babling again.. and teacher is coming right away so,
Keep this up man, very creative and pro :)
5/5 - 9/10
Cheers

unrealdark responds:

Ooh, you naughty boy! >:P
Well yeah we all got our personal idea's, it's no problem, it's actually good to hear how others think. ;) Oh and I wil think about creating some harder genres as well, I never tried hard-trance, so I will deffinately try it out. It's actually a really cool idea.
I made a trance/progressive demo already, so be sure to check that one out. And May I thank you (out of my tiny heart) for your compliments 'you do have a good feeling for rythm'! I love to have some compliments lol. ^^ Thanks for reviewing, and get your ass back to work! XD

[-={DJ-PHX}=- Beach Dreams]

Woah!

i can barely speak, as im telling you right now, i rly dream away with this one, the intro was very nice, exactly my taste of how a trance track should be.
this is in one word amazing!

Worth a download(wich im going to do right away:D), worth to be in the top 5 of the week! :D
Amazing!
5/5 - 10/10
-tim

unrealdark responds:

Yeah I found a way to express emotion into a song, I am so glad I can do this now. It feels so good. Hehe, thanks for downloading but Top 5? Really? :P
I am glad you liked it, I actually thought you were more into the harder genres. :D
Thanks for reviewing, I'll catch up with you on msn sometime. ;)