D-Chain's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Light as a feather...]

well,

its your first try on trance..
so i wont be too hard this time.

The start is very nice and progresses a little as progressive ;)
I do hear you have some experience tho,
BUT, its indeed not trance as you said in the PM :P
I hear also DNB ;) thats nice man :)
Its also a bit techno'isch..

What i hate about this track it is the weird sound, i dunno what vsts you used, but try to make it more trancy ;)
Well just as i told, the DNB is awsomeness ;)
The progression is also nice.
this track could be made bigger,
With a little tweakin and peakin here and there, and maybe some high notes added at some points :P

PS; dont use TOO much samples, it makes your track worthless/awfull man ;)
if you DO wanna use samples, make you own ;)

8/10 - 4/5 ;)
(Woops, sorry for lowering the rating of the track with 0.04 points, My bad xD)

-Tim

deadmetal420 responds:

rofl. .04 isnt a big deal bra. lol.

[hum hum hum]

Yow man!

you improved allot since the last one :)
but.. i dunno under what genre i could put this just to mention, i hear allot sounds, like 8-bit or so,
i can REALY here trance, so i wonder if you also could make trance youknow :P
its easier then HS
anyways back to the song :P

Im sorry to tell you this now; but i hate the kick, its like a jumpstyle kick and doesnt fit in hardstyle ;)
what i DO like, is the melo your doing there! Oh man, i do SO love it :D
and feels so damn great listening to it! :D
(Thats why i wonder if you could make trance like a pro you know)

The 8-bit or something could be replaced by another sound, i dont know what kind of vst's you used in this one, id like to know if i may ;)

well i told you the real BIG pointers and those are only;
the kick
8-bit

ill give you a 10/10, just bcoz of the melo :D
i just cant tell you how much i love it :D
and a 3,5/5 (4/5)
I hope you can do something with the critic ;)

PS: could you also check my newest track; Sky Dreamer ;)
Thnx ^^

-Tim

deadmetal420 responds:

yea the kick was bothering me too. but i couldnt put my finger on it. but because you called it jumpstyle, its probably the bass. it sticks out too much im assuming. anyway, yea dude. ill deffinately check out your new track! :D

[SHREEK!!! (deadmetalremix)]

Ey dude

i guess im srry for the late response man XD some personal stuffs at home you know,
anyways here goes;
i can hear directly from the start off, your a beginner @ HS
thats no problem at all.. i was once too :)

i can hear your beat isnt working out aswell, and thats rly bad tho,
and the overal sound isnt rly nice to listen too.
-this is indeed critic from the highest shelf, and its gonna be hard for you to develop/evolve your HS sounds and beats, but this is a first song, so ill stop my torturing :P

i would be pleasent to help you out if you want, just to give you ideas and tips to make your HS better.
also i could say now; HS isnt easy making :P
And isnt this from the NC ? :P just as you said.

anyways, gimme a sign or pm me if you want to develop/evolve ;)
PS: it could take some time to get a response from me, just to let you know ;)

Take care !
-Tim.
(3/5 - 6/10)

[German Hard Trance YEHH]

Ooh fuk me!

I fukking love you man!
Hella great upping hard trance track :D
Awsome!

Rate 5/5 - 10/10 + download + Ipod!

-Tim

[10 Seconds in Heaven]

WOW! =O

Omg man, that is some rly kick ass shite :D
turned my fkdamn day into a great day !
the title is right tho it ounds more like hell yea, but thats the point :P

I wonder if you also have a 'full' version of this, atleast longer coz,
this rly is awsome ;)
i would like to give this a 4,5/5(5/5) - 9/10 too :P
Rly well done

-Tim Aka T&T

[-={DJ-PHX}=- Progressive {WIP}]

Well,

To start with, Its VERY calming :)
as a second, its not typical progtrance, or as you call it progressive trance :P
this is more chill-out trance.
its not typical my style of trance :P
but still gonna give you a 10/10 - 4,5/5
(4,5 is imposible, so ill just give a 4/5) bcoz of the great work you prove with this :)
theres not much to critic on this :P
just finnish it soon! :)

PS; Check out our new song(its a collab)

Cheers!

unrealdark responds:

Yeah it's indeed calming, I did my best to create some 'progressive' atmosphere.
But it was also my first try so probably not the best lol. Thanks for reviewing, I'll check your collab right away. ;)

[-={DJ-PHX}=- Flutlicht Icarus]

Creative =)

Well, actually i cant speak with 'alot' of words now :P
coz im at school.. if the teacher see's what im doing im busted.
But, its Creative, u use very nice effect's, the only thing that bothers me is the sound of the synth in the middle part, but it does fit in the song(dont see this as critism) its just my taste of how a trance song could be :P
Unlike that, the vocal fit's nicely too :)
its almost pro man =)
I wonder if you could also make some 'harder' trance, or a variation between trance & progressive ^^
Coz you do have a good feeling for ritme,
Btw, from 1:10/1:11 i hear rly dark but nice synth comming.
so, my second wonder is if you could make hardtrance too :P

Anyways, im babling again.. and teacher is coming right away so,
Keep this up man, very creative and pro :)
5/5 - 9/10
Cheers

unrealdark responds:

Ooh, you naughty boy! >:P
Well yeah we all got our personal idea's, it's no problem, it's actually good to hear how others think. ;) Oh and I wil think about creating some harder genres as well, I never tried hard-trance, so I will deffinately try it out. It's actually a really cool idea.
I made a trance/progressive demo already, so be sure to check that one out. And May I thank you (out of my tiny heart) for your compliments 'you do have a good feeling for rythm'! I love to have some compliments lol. ^^ Thanks for reviewing, and get your ass back to work! XD

[-={DJ-PHX}=- Beach Dreams]

Woah!

i can barely speak, as im telling you right now, i rly dream away with this one, the intro was very nice, exactly my taste of how a trance track should be.
this is in one word amazing!

Worth a download(wich im going to do right away:D), worth to be in the top 5 of the week! :D
Amazing!
5/5 - 10/10
-tim

unrealdark responds:

Yeah I found a way to express emotion into a song, I am so glad I can do this now. It feels so good. Hehe, thanks for downloading but Top 5? Really? :P
I am glad you liked it, I actually thought you were more into the harder genres. :D
Thanks for reviewing, I'll catch up with you on msn sometime. ;)

[Sigma the Gigantic]

not bad :)

not bad man :D
even tho this is from a friend of yours,
well i rly like the solo wich starts at 2:07 ^^

the synth's in the beginning ar also attractive,
1:01 also a nice build from the synth :P
Eventho i was a metal head..
Wich i still am,
this is pretty damn good :D

well infact, there's not much critic to give here :P
5/5-10/10
Keep it up ^^
-Tim

[M4sh up some space]

WOW!

Man this def have alooot of potential,
rly like it even tho it is 8bit(from wich i thought i didnt like:P)
But this is amazing man, i can feel rly some emotion coming through in the middle of the track and further.
indeed a rly nice videogamesong ^^
5/5.10/10
-Tim

Take care.