Well,
If you dont mind ill vote fair
I actually cant find a way of fitting this track in trance EXCEPT for the melo starting @ 2:30 i have to compliment you for creating such a nice melody :)
and for the rest of the track:
Its to fast,
the BPM is VERY important when youre trying to make a trance track
as for the different frequentions within the effects/sounds.
you also need a nice BEAT made by just using a:
Kick and LOW frequention bass, with another bass with the same notes but with a higher frequention ;)
After that youll prolly able to make a melo =]
As for this track,ill vote 7 out of 10 and 4 out of 5
Cheers and take care!
-Tim