Well well,
a great start for a trance WiP.
and since you said you always like more constructive criticm i shall try this with headphones for maximum quality.
the mixing so far seems to be good, and stays stable when the melody is being introduced.
the kick could use some more of a bass instead of a punch[attack]..
i'm not that easy in voting/reviewing so yea..
the same for the percussion/cymbals, its like it fits into this piece, but yet it doesn't xD
but thats what i said, maybe if you change the kick,
the cymbals wont lagg the kick anymore.
besides that, the melody is good but still kinda happy for me, or too basshunter if you understand me. :)
the progression was smoothly done, my compliments!
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things that could be changed some more:
kick-bass [less attack]
percussion/cymbals, if the kick doesn't workout.
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Thats all xD
i still give you my 5
and 9 since its a WiP!
_Timo