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[~K4P~ 35 - piano improvisation]

Im not good

in reviewing piano songs but i will try my best.

the first notes from 00:00 - 00:30/35 have a great emotional feeling K4P
and i can hear you CAN compose something really good.
but i think just like toler said, youll need lessons to fully bring the story you have, to our minds and hearts, very deeply.

it just feels like you havent really practise this, or study it..
[i know that isnt the truth] but still, a little stiffy from time to time.

other then that, i can listen to this several times, nothing really wrong with it tbh.

so youll get my vote, fav and download to send it to my Ipod.

Musical-Memoirs responds:

the first 30 seconds went surprisingly well, in those 30 seconds i only made one very small mistake too, the intro is really my favorite part
and im really working hard to make myself better so that i can more easily let my feeling flow into the notes, i only just started, but now im a lot better then when i played this already

and the thing is, after choosing the scale to play in... i just simply played and recorded the first try
this is the first and only time i played it, so i didnt practice this piece at all
improvising is just playing out of the blue without giving yourself enough time to think about it
if i had practiced then there would be almost no mistakes, but i first want to rewrite the melody before that, taking the good parts and rewrite the bad ones, but i havent had really the time for it though

thanks!!!

[Sunrise (NG Cut)]

i must

give 5, damn this is awsome :|

DJ-Qwamii responds:

Thanks mate!

[Crom - Lust [Dubstep]]

0_0 !!

w00000000t DUDE! that bass snare kick combi is just sick! really really awsome! :D

tip: moar instruments
tip: a small melody like you said earlier is welcome aswell
tip: i dont have moar tips :)

awsomeness ^^

[Indefinable - Awaken]

Not very trancy but

sure aint techo like Vector said...
most ppl just dont see the diff in genre's and call everything techno -.-

but this one has its trance and somewhat dance parts :)

i must say, i like it :D

5 - 9 + fav + DL

indefinable responds:

Thanks for pointing that out! :D

I'm glad you like it. :)

[The Crash :D]

you do good

and are growing much since last time :)

DJ-xTc responds:

Thx, but once again i will lose everything

[Friday Night [Dubstep Remix]]

Hmmm

not your very best, but great start to pull of more in the future.

like the guy said beneeth me: need LFO
and if it doesnt work with you then perhaps you should take a look at your whole mastering part??

[Time's up [Dubstep Remix]]

i already loved the original

xKore is a great guy, but i think you will surpass him someday dude :)
you get the highest score i can give :)

CRomDayLeR responds:

Yay I luv the Original too, that´s why I made that remix. but dude! its still not really finished, I am thinking about putting a new really awesome bassline in that one :D

thanks dude for your review :D

[This wil never work!]

less then more

This might actually work after some time..

first, its a good intro.
you introduce every instrument splended [mixing = 9]
the drums you have chosen are of the
right choice, i dont really mind how long tracks are but i think you might wanna shorten the length of this intro peace?
like a maximum around 2 to 2:30 minutes
if you can do this, you might wanna go further with the false melody to introduce your breakdown with a PAD that slowly comes in.

well i cant really think of anything so far, i hope this helps, if not you can always hit me up.

Cheers

[Destined Heart]

Hmmm

you deff need some huge inspiration to create some trance dude :)
i can see you have already gotten to good start point to develop your trance skills, and im curious to see it growing ;)

nice start btw :) great build, but i cant feel the qlimatique part after the build..

7 out of 10
+5 [dont wanna ruin your score]

Dragonarios responds:

Haha, thanks man. Your talking about this like you know a thing or two. You make music for a living? Ill make a new version when i have time. Thanks for the help so far Timo :)

- Dragonarios

[Mindflow [Dubstep]]

missing,

kind of heavier bass attached to it :)