D-Chain's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Twilight Sun]

well tbh

You will prob need some EQing and Compression on your kick...
and there's not guite a line in this song...
you just change some synth sounds to keep it interesting right?
well, thats not a way to make a song xD

Besides that, your piano is just genius....
i dont know how to review this since it hasnt any form of build-up or structure xD

and im sorry for my bad english tho, im dutch, just like you xD

oh and if you need ANY help, just say so kay?
Cheers

Dragonarios responds:

Well, since youre review was in english, i will reply in english :)

About the line, you mean like a main melody right? There actually is a main line, there is an intro and those synths are indeed for varierity. But also like a.....rest between the lines. But im no professional, so maybe i have to work on this more so it will sound less random.

Thanks for the compliment on the piano, funny thing is: this song came to mind when i played the piano melodies (On the actual piano, that is) and then i expanded it to this song. Maybe ill just record my playing on the piano then? XD

So it does has build-up structure, but alright, i will work on this to make it sound more like it has structure.

And thats not bad english by the way, just saying.

And ill PM you when i need help, ill probably need it.

- Dragonarios

[Feel the Night]

Well

with a BPM of 150 - 155 you could easily make hardstyle... not?

a BPM for trance is: 132 - 140 dont get smart

and Nexundo, is just a somebody who doesnt know where he's talking about xD

Dragonarios responds:

Well sure, im not an expert. So ok, but he does write a serious review for me. People tell me this is one of my best songs, but you give me a 6. I would like to know why.

PS. Nexundo does know what he's talking about, and he's been a great help so far writing reviews for me!

[{[Run with a comet]}°Demo°]

dude

this is just a general basshunter-copy+paste-dance-song, NOT trance....

XELAPA responds:

Basshunter really? Thanks I'm happy you've compare me with Basshunter ^^

But I didn't make this song by inspiring of him.

[Crom - Golden Clouds [WiPLoop]]

Wa tha go man!

bass AND kick are the best :)
you did develop something, but i cant precisely find what it is tho :)

great job!
vot of 5
score of 9
will be faving when your done in the future ;)

but how is this possible.. such a low score????
lame zero bombies -_-'

CRomDayLeR responds:

ye I already Got a zero at the beginning but that not so bad, its only the WiP.

I have to hope that the full won´t be zero bombed :D

thx for the review

[hau5mau5-The Way wip]

Yea

you can do better melodic-wise,
but the beat is just stunning my man:D

keep it up!

[xKore - Time's Up]

1 word

Masterpiece

[-PdG- Kirby Remix 2 (FULL)]

soo..

now what, im a silly donkey ???
watch your mouth little mouse xD

some things changed, i like the last part from like: 1.30 and further.

keep them banging xD

Prodigal responds:

lolo thanks

[MM - Trip To Dreamworld (WIP)]

ok track

nothing commercial about this, just pure trans.
deserves an all time top 10.

[Syst3m Sh0ck [RNG]]

lol

where is the 'in trans' part??
i feel like its more a dancie track, but anyways, great great quality mate :)
props.
full score!

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Cybernetic Castle REDONE]

well

are your sure you have the right original link submitted in your discription? xDD
bcoz it leads to a song named D*MESS - Jingle 3 , which doesnt have anything this track has.
so.. update original link??

Prodigal responds:

UPDATED NOW SEND ME A GOOD REVIEW