Hmm
the ideas are pretty cool, tho i dont think they are in the right places.
and quality wise. dont mind i wont judge it.
you see you start of with nice plucked synths, which doesnt happen every day(so thats good) BUT afterwards you jump into this absolutely amazing part which i would have saved for later on by building your intro.
i would be doing a kick clap(and perhaps some drums) basics, and slowly build it up for more tention.
then on to your chords, they really are amazing man, but i would just rape that kick out(sorry for the word) it just doesnt feel at its place there imo.
and you can do so much more with the chords by building it up using filters and stuff.
afterwards i would have taken the insane beats back, the same you have in the beginning.
that way your getting to an antiklimax.
now your breakdown with pads and piano's is also amazing just as the part following up,
but at this point im kinda lost.. bc its different from the section before? like youve been trying out 2 different tracks in 1 project file.
i dont really know what to think actually. thus i will see this as an experiment, and definitely see your skills are getting better. :)