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for about 50% i agree with Technicolour..
but for the other 50%...
this sounds a tad like the older (beginner stage) of hardbass/hardstyle.
its def not jumpstyle, jump is way to soft.
tho like i said i agree 50% with it, the bass needs some extra attention, as for the kick.. well mostly hardstyle has a kick-punch and an unbelievable kick-tail which is the bass at the same time.
so if you really want to look at the kick, you need to follow some tut's on how to start with it and how to do it :)
as for the melody, its pretty plain, but i rather like it this way since you where somewhat going for HS.
and i also mentioned and have to give you a compliment since your last one, you increased the quality pretty much.
goodjob