lool im gonna spend as much time as i want on pc,
only bc im going to France in September!
nice loop, loops very well!
lool im gonna spend as much time as i want on pc,
only bc im going to France in September!
nice loop, loops very well!
Nice! I always wanted to go in France :)
thats a lead sound that brings joy to my ears!
keep rocking man
i agree with BlueOceans,
either the vocals need a boost or the guitar less.
however once you have done one of these things,
maybe u could think about editing the vocals just a little bit?
with a tad reverb maybe,
widen it a bit to make it sound a bit fuller.. or anything of your choice lol
Thanks for the review, reverb does sound like a good idea!
basically ive heard the song, read most reviews..
my advice;
stay true to who you are.
so here i am.. still awake while i should be sleeping..
Hello to you sir! haha
the moment i started playing this song i thought it was elektro lol
the first cuttoff (vocal) synth is off key.. you might want to fix that at 0.13 - 0.16
the melody coming in at 0.31 sounds epic! reminded me a bit of hardtrance melodies.
good fill at 1.03! but im not sure what the weird breakbeat/trap beat is about? i dont really like it that much if im honest. you best use a snare roll of some kind, there are serious a thousand ways to do a snare roll.
alright so after the build it sounds good again.
at 1.49 there's a Snare drum overpowering everything with its volume but most with its reverb.. might want to fix it.
hmm again the breakbeat/trap beat..
the main synth is nice in a strange way lol
hmm the outro was a bit like.. IN YOUR FACE and gone.. bit too fast for me.
overall i would say i like this song for 55% the hats where imho perfectly done,
but the structure, the idea behind the song is a bit unclear to me.
my suggestion is that you should try and listen to other trancy songs, study the structure of them and possibly the waveform!
Thanks for the honest review! I suppose I didn't have a clear direction in my head, maybe that's something i'll work on next time.
i hope all this teasing is going to pay off in the end!
why the dubstep sounds? the song would have been much better without it because the melody is epic enough to do justice! ;)
I don't know what you mean about "dubstep sounds".. you mean the bass?
haha, that's not dubstep, it's just a harder bass sound to give the track some diversity ans contrast, it's not unheard of. Ever listen to the sounds of artists like Shogun or even Armin?
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