D-Chain's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Somthin Good wip]

summery ??

jeeeez dude!
i love you :D

this is just A-MAZ-ING!

but yes, as you might guess, your kick doesnt really fit imo.

but please, try to finish this when you have the time!
goodluck.

- Timo / SkyTrance `-' Mau5

DJ-xTc responds:

when i made it too an mp3 a bunch of stuff changed, and got left out. One is obvious the kick since it sounds like one of FL's default kicks. Another one is at the begging the release on the pluck is way too loud, its suppose to be loud but not that loud. The chords are ehh since ive listened to them a few times.

So in short I NEED TO WORK ON THIS A BUNCH! :D

[Pokemon G/S Lance Battle Final]

Darn, this is......

dude, your the best!
this is really awsome as it reminds me of playing a great Nintendo[gameboy] game :)

its a shame i turned 19 >.< id love to play it again some time.

Burn7 responds:

Psh, I'm 20 and I'd still play it. If I had time. Just because you're a certain age doesn't mean you have to act it.

[Levitate (Trance WIP)]

i need to add a summary

hmm, im trying to give you a usefull review here if you dont mind.

the first thing that actually hits me as a 'depression' is the kick,
it isnt really great, the sounds doesnt go with it by my feeling, doesnt flow.
it could use more of a bass instead of a punch.

in other words; your kicks laggs bass.

up to my headphone *put on the headphone*

ok, the first thing i do hear is a good low bass, well done mate!
the minus point about it is that it sounds a little bit like a square, maybe it could be deeper since you introduce a piano piece further in the song.

im now flowing into your wonderfull pad, this is really good, i get the feeling i can fight the world now!

suddenly it stops, too bad it aint longer then it is xD

ok the last bits, upon to the cymbals/percs ect, they seem to be pretty standard if you would ask me, try to add some EQ's or filters/reverb, maybe some delay on some of them just to get a bit of a flow.

well, i hope my review isnt too bad, i tryed my best to explain what i could be better in my opinion.

please pm me when youve finished it :)
idl ike to hear what you will do with it.

goodluck!

`-' Timo.

Absolix responds:

actually, this review is pretty useful :D

If there's one thing I can guarentee anybody in my WIP's, is that it's gonna be rough, :D
However what you can hear, is what the song when it is fully finished is gonna include. Same outline you know

This is actually the first time I've used my own sounds.
I created them with 3xOsc, made the pad, and the pluck (the lead with the square tone).

Thanks again for the review, I'll take your advice to consideration when I get around to this again :)

Kind regards
~Patrick

[Intermission [Preview]]

i think

youre better at DnB at this point already:)
this is freaking awsome dude!!
i hope to hear the finished version sooner or later sometime ;)

and this reminds me of an realy old rave/house/trance song back in 1998 if im not wrong.
called; Multidubbers - The Infusion Pump

keep rocking!

CRomDayLeR responds:

thx dude :D

I will upload the finished version on friday (My Birthday :D).

[Evelade (Trance WIP)]

well

its not my style to crap someones work down...
so i wont :)

first off, i really hate punchy kicks... they are need to fit into upcrapping tunes..
which this, in my ears totally isnt, since its among beautifull!
and as you couldve expected;

i would like to give you the advice of compressing your kick and also EQ it with a random EQ .. which means, ANY will do :)
and i would also like to state this; dont use too much stereo enhancer on your kicks ..
it makes it sound... unusual if you get what i mean.

id rather call it ugly but yea....

as for the creativity in this song, its beast!
i have to admit, i really like your mixing.

probably this score isnt the best one you could have received,
so.. i will not bomb your voting down which means i will be giving a 5.

keep going.

Absolix responds:

Thank you D chain, I'm not really tallented with EQ'ing kicks yet, but I'm getting there.
I try to get original with my work. It is quite a beautiful melody.
Thanks again for the review :)

[The Fall is Here!]

dmau5 ideas

respecty!

please finish it sometime :)

DJ-xTc responds:

I changed it up a lot haha, its up now :D

[Skypedia]

Interesting!

has a strange, positive, classical trance atmos!
Really good job dude :)
keep doing what you do ^^

Absolix responds:

Thanks! Believe me, I'll keep up my work :)

[AF - I Have A Dream (S&G)]

Lol

i know that vocal ...
it was used many times in the past in jumpstyle xDD
im talking about 1999 - 2000 jumpstyle.,

aliaspharow responds:

LOL! You don't know mlk?

[space aurora]

Woow :O im surprised as hell !

Yes!
this is awsome dude !:D

really great improvement, way better then the last one, keep this up man!

Full score :D

killerhoofd responds:

well i,m surprised as hell that you liked it so much!
thanx for the review man!

[Crom - Walking]

Yub not wub but definitely fub

hehe this is funny, something else,
the beat is nice, and the instruments are of the right quality :)
you know whats funny,

i made a crap last night in my bathroom and flushed the toilet,

no wait that was 2 days ago :|
CRAP

you know what the fun part is, i told this joke to someone else already. (:

CRomDayLeR responds:

lol