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well okay, im going to make you pay and let you eat your words lol
straight up;
Why do you use so many friggin notes? you know how hard it is to master a track like this?
Do you? :D

this is what you said:
I tried to build upon the same things that I did in "Cosmic Stream of Life" and "End of the Day" in this.

and this is what i think of that:
Its not always okay to build upon the ideas youve done already.. sometimes it works really well, and i agree you should take full advantage lol. however i think this time you milked the cow to many times.

Intro: i have not much to tell you because its simple yet effective.
2nd intro/build-up: i just love when a song has more then 1 intro or build ups before getting 'to the point' you get my point? lol
when the build up stops at 1:09 i can not determine what just happend.. did you go from intro to klimax? or.. intro to a 2nd or possible 3rd intro? sorry to tell but its confusing meh lol.

i love the deep impact at 1:38, you did well with the transitions in general in this song.
however its hard to tell as to what is what.. there is no actual structure what so ever, you go from A to B to A to C which is fine i guess, but its not working on me. also a breakdown? where is it?
only short 'rest' moments, guess you just really went all out with the 'hyper energetic mash' lol maybe next time try to create a song with an intro, break, chorus, outro keep it simple BUT just as energetic.
and dont forget to reduce the note usage lol. you can always layer sounds with the same melody or counter-layer them like Exilious said. or just use a counter(different) melody..

like the melody!
But your overall mastering lacks lol
Hopefully that will change.
ill follow you on NG and soundcloud for fun.

Sounds like minecraftttttttttt omg :D

DJ-xTc responds:

nope, just a filtered piano ;)

nice combination of dance, breakbeat, 80s and 90s influences with the usual video-game themed melodies and small beats.
its defo something ive not come across yet until now ;)
judging from my perspective as ive listened to a couple of your other songs from beginning till this song, i can say you improved tenfold with this one :)
Its difficult for me to tell what you could improve. or how as this is totally out of my league.
so my only advice for a future project like this is to balance everything out, till the finest tweaks are perfect!

Keep rocking, because you have just earned a new follower!

Spadezer responds:

Thanks. I wasn't able to spend a really good amount of time fine tuning the details on this one, but I'm glad it turned out as good as it did.

And I'm happy to expand my following. Lols

try Lunary Recs ;)
and short as F*ck. lol

Mea-Anima responds:

Lunary Recs? But aren't they a little more into underground and club house? (from what I can hear).
But i'll send a demo to it for sure!

Thanks for the very small but still counting review :D

Really nice quality bro! i love the melodies, even the complextro/electro is awsome (im not a huge fan of complextro)
The composing is very well thought out even for 10 hours of work!
however.. i do miss some kind of WOW factor. Like a bomb in your face lol like WOW fuck yeah!

DjAbbic responds:

Hey, really glad you like it. If it were me I would say that the wow factor would be in the complextro drop, but I guess it's lacking a bit on the high end. I did experiment with moving the saws up one octave, but it felt too empty.

I'll try to improve that wow factor next time :p. Thanks as always for the review!

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