well
its not my style to crap someones work down...
so i wont :)
first off, i really hate punchy kicks... they are need to fit into upcrapping tunes..
which this, in my ears totally isnt, since its among beautifull!
and as you couldve expected;
i would like to give you the advice of compressing your kick and also EQ it with a random EQ .. which means, ANY will do :)
and i would also like to state this; dont use too much stereo enhancer on your kicks ..
it makes it sound... unusual if you get what i mean.
id rather call it ugly but yea....
as for the creativity in this song, its beast!
i have to admit, i really like your mixing.
probably this score isnt the best one you could have received,
so.. i will not bomb your voting down which means i will be giving a 5.
keep going.