D-Chain's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[SHREEK!!! (deadmetalremix)]

Ey dude

i guess im srry for the late response man XD some personal stuffs at home you know,
anyways here goes;
i can hear directly from the start off, your a beginner @ HS
thats no problem at all.. i was once too :)

i can hear your beat isnt working out aswell, and thats rly bad tho,
and the overal sound isnt rly nice to listen too.
-this is indeed critic from the highest shelf, and its gonna be hard for you to develop/evolve your HS sounds and beats, but this is a first song, so ill stop my torturing :P

i would be pleasent to help you out if you want, just to give you ideas and tips to make your HS better.
also i could say now; HS isnt easy making :P
And isnt this from the NC ? :P just as you said.

anyways, gimme a sign or pm me if you want to develop/evolve ;)
PS: it could take some time to get a response from me, just to let you know ;)

Take care !
-Tim.
(3/5 - 6/10)

[German Hard Trance YEHH]

Ooh fuk me!

I fukking love you man!
Hella great upping hard trance track :D
Awsome!

Rate 5/5 - 10/10 + download + Ipod!

-Tim

[10 Seconds in Heaven]

WOW! =O

Omg man, that is some rly kick ass shite :D
turned my fkdamn day into a great day !
the title is right tho it ounds more like hell yea, but thats the point :P

I wonder if you also have a 'full' version of this, atleast longer coz,
this rly is awsome ;)
i would like to give this a 4,5/5(5/5) - 9/10 too :P
Rly well done

-Tim Aka T&T

[-={DJ-PHX}=- Progressive {WIP}]

Well,

To start with, Its VERY calming :)
as a second, its not typical progtrance, or as you call it progressive trance :P
this is more chill-out trance.
its not typical my style of trance :P
but still gonna give you a 10/10 - 4,5/5
(4,5 is imposible, so ill just give a 4/5) bcoz of the great work you prove with this :)
theres not much to critic on this :P
just finnish it soon! :)

PS; Check out our new song(its a collab)

Cheers!

unrealdark responds:

Yeah it's indeed calming, I did my best to create some 'progressive' atmosphere.
But it was also my first try so probably not the best lol. Thanks for reviewing, I'll check your collab right away. ;)

[-={DJ-PHX}=- Flutlicht Icarus]

Creative =)

Well, actually i cant speak with 'alot' of words now :P
coz im at school.. if the teacher see's what im doing im busted.
But, its Creative, u use very nice effect's, the only thing that bothers me is the sound of the synth in the middle part, but it does fit in the song(dont see this as critism) its just my taste of how a trance song could be :P
Unlike that, the vocal fit's nicely too :)
its almost pro man =)
I wonder if you could also make some 'harder' trance, or a variation between trance & progressive ^^
Coz you do have a good feeling for ritme,
Btw, from 1:10/1:11 i hear rly dark but nice synth comming.
so, my second wonder is if you could make hardtrance too :P

Anyways, im babling again.. and teacher is coming right away so,
Keep this up man, very creative and pro :)
5/5 - 9/10
Cheers

unrealdark responds:

Ooh, you naughty boy! >:P
Well yeah we all got our personal idea's, it's no problem, it's actually good to hear how others think. ;) Oh and I wil think about creating some harder genres as well, I never tried hard-trance, so I will deffinately try it out. It's actually a really cool idea.
I made a trance/progressive demo already, so be sure to check that one out. And May I thank you (out of my tiny heart) for your compliments 'you do have a good feeling for rythm'! I love to have some compliments lol. ^^ Thanks for reviewing, and get your ass back to work! XD

[-={DJ-PHX}=- Beach Dreams]

Woah!

i can barely speak, as im telling you right now, i rly dream away with this one, the intro was very nice, exactly my taste of how a trance track should be.
this is in one word amazing!

Worth a download(wich im going to do right away:D), worth to be in the top 5 of the week! :D
Amazing!
5/5 - 10/10
-tim

unrealdark responds:

Yeah I found a way to express emotion into a song, I am so glad I can do this now. It feels so good. Hehe, thanks for downloading but Top 5? Really? :P
I am glad you liked it, I actually thought you were more into the harder genres. :D
Thanks for reviewing, I'll catch up with you on msn sometime. ;)

[Sigma the Gigantic]

not bad :)

not bad man :D
even tho this is from a friend of yours,
well i rly like the solo wich starts at 2:07 ^^

the synth's in the beginning ar also attractive,
1:01 also a nice build from the synth :P
Eventho i was a metal head..
Wich i still am,
this is pretty damn good :D

well infact, there's not much critic to give here :P
5/5-10/10
Keep it up ^^
-Tim

[M4sh up some space]

WOW!

Man this def have alooot of potential,
rly like it even tho it is 8bit(from wich i thought i didnt like:P)
But this is amazing man, i can feel rly some emotion coming through in the middle of the track and further.
indeed a rly nice videogamesong ^^
5/5.10/10
-Tim

Take care.

[The Way it Should be]

not alone

well, your not the only one who's in love :P
when it started i thought like.. hm okay?
then when the bells started to find their way to this incredible simple loop, i fell in love yea :P
then you would be expecting some big, and there is indeed :P
+ i know DnB isnt easy to make,
and as im listenin now, like WTF! dude that slayer rockz! :P
but the only thing that gets attation to me is like the slayer gets everything, so i would say turn down the volume a bit you know :P
coz its a DnB track, give your drums some attation too ^^

And ofcours the extreme but also nice bass that comes in
is an addiction to me, tho.. not everyone likes extreme basses, but do as you like, i like it alot ^^
and at some points i was thinkin like, hmm i recognize this or something?
like ive heard this melody already, or something like it XD
maybe bcoz im a very HUGE DBZ fan :P
anyways, its cool dude!
for just checking and messing with sounds its pretty decent :D

5/5 - 10/10
Way tha go, Current score: 4.00 XD

deadmetal420 responds:

thanks bro. me and my friend (i still need to get him set up here) do that alot with our music with the recognizing it and all that. im not sure where it comes from, but we do alright. and i still cant thank you enough for the info for the HS kicks.

btw, thats not slayer. :P

[-={dj-phx}=- Nu-style {wip}]

NotBad! :D

Not bad man!
Rly liking the melo :D
the kick COULD use more bass at the punch(The boom)
or that is just how it comes through my headphone XD

and, if/when your gonna finnish this one, create some variation in the melo.
i'd guess you use like 4 bars for the melo, and repeat it like a couple of times :P
make it like 8 bars totall so you could repeat it like 2/4/6 times (8 times is bit too long, could mess up your song if its too long)
Hope this will help a bit :)
10/10 - 4/5(4/5 b'coz its a preview :P)
Take care

-Tim

unrealdark responds:

Kick could use some more afterpunch yeah. :D But I don't know if it's still an nu-style based bass then, but I'll deffinately will increase it. ;)
Will do some variation in the song, I already made it longer, I guess I whas over-exited to upload this. :)

WHAT!!!? A 4/5!!!?? You W%$*!
Lol joking. :D Thanks for the review man, much apreciated! ;)