i need to add a summary
hmm, im trying to give you a usefull review here if you dont mind.
the first thing that actually hits me as a 'depression' is the kick,
it isnt really great, the sounds doesnt go with it by my feeling, doesnt flow.
it could use more of a bass instead of a punch.
in other words; your kicks laggs bass.
up to my headphone *put on the headphone*
ok, the first thing i do hear is a good low bass, well done mate!
the minus point about it is that it sounds a little bit like a square, maybe it could be deeper since you introduce a piano piece further in the song.
im now flowing into your wonderfull pad, this is really good, i get the feeling i can fight the world now!
suddenly it stops, too bad it aint longer then it is xD
ok the last bits, upon to the cymbals/percs ect, they seem to be pretty standard if you would ask me, try to add some EQ's or filters/reverb, maybe some delay on some of them just to get a bit of a flow.
well, i hope my review isnt too bad, i tryed my best to explain what i could be better in my opinion.
please pm me when youve finished it :)
idl ike to hear what you will do with it.
goodluck!
`-' Timo.