so here i am.. still awake while i should be sleeping..
Hello to you sir! haha
the moment i started playing this song i thought it was elektro lol
the first cuttoff (vocal) synth is off key.. you might want to fix that at 0.13 - 0.16
the melody coming in at 0.31 sounds epic! reminded me a bit of hardtrance melodies.
good fill at 1.03! but im not sure what the weird breakbeat/trap beat is about? i dont really like it that much if im honest. you best use a snare roll of some kind, there are serious a thousand ways to do a snare roll.
alright so after the build it sounds good again.
at 1.49 there's a Snare drum overpowering everything with its volume but most with its reverb.. might want to fix it.
hmm again the breakbeat/trap beat..
the main synth is nice in a strange way lol
hmm the outro was a bit like.. IN YOUR FACE and gone.. bit too fast for me.
overall i would say i like this song for 55% the hats where imho perfectly done,
but the structure, the idea behind the song is a bit unclear to me.
my suggestion is that you should try and listen to other trancy songs, study the structure of them and possibly the waveform!